My self-introduction and goals for UCS1001

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Dear Professor Blackstone,

I hope this email finds you well. My name is Nurin Syazwana, a Year 1 Civil Engineering student studying at Singapore Institute of Technology (SIT). I wanted to take a moment to introduce myself and share my background, communication strengths and weaknesses, and goals for this course.

I did my diploma in Architecture at Nanyang Polytechnic before deciding to pursue my degree in Civil Engineering at SIT. I was intrigued by the beauty of buildings, especially in traditional Japanese and Islamic architecture, which inspired me to choose Architecture for my diploma. After graduating, I reflected on how I wanted to explore a different area of Architecture while staying connected to the field. This reflection led me to choose Civil Engineering as it offers a new perspective and opportunities to contribute to the built environment.

A notable strength in my communication is my ability to articulate ideas clearly, which I developed through frequent presentations and critiques during my Architecture studies. I often had to explain abstract concepts to my lecturers, helping them understand the reasoning and meaning behind my designs. On the other hand, I recognize that my public speaking skills need improvement. Having not presented in some time, I have noticed a decline in my confidence and composure during public speaking engagements.

In this module, I aim to achieve two specific goals: first, to refine my ability to convey technical information effectively to diverse audiences, and second, to build confidence in presenting. I believe these skills will not only enhance my academic performance but also prepare me for professional interactions in the engineering field.

What makes me unique is my determination to learn and grow. Outside of engineering, I enjoy playing the guitar regularly and learning new things, which helps me stay creative and balanced.

Thank you for your time, and I look forward to learning from you and contributing to this course.

Best regards,
Nurin Syazwana

Comments

  1. Gheslane17 January 2025 at 01:50

    Dear Nurin Syazwana,

    Thank you for sharing your self-introduction and goals for UCS1001. Your letter is thoughtfully crafted and provides a clear overview of your background, strengths, and objectives.

    I would suggest adding a brief anecdote or specific example from your Architecture studies to make your letter more engaging and relatable. For instance, mentioning a particular project or moment that inspired you to pursue Civil Engineering could add depth and personality. You could also specify what kind of technical information you hope to convey or how you plan to build your confidence in presenting.

    Overall, your letter demonstrates clarity and a strong sense of purpose. Your enthusiasm for learning and growth shines through, making it a compelling introduction.

    Best regards,
    Gheslane

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    1. NURIN19 January 2025 at 20:29

      Dear Gheslane,

      Thank you for kind and genuine words!It gave me motivation to strive to be better. Also, I will take note of the suggestions to make my letter better.

      Best wishes,
      Nurin

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  2. siqi19 January 2025 at 05:54

    Hi Nurin,

    Thank you for sharing your introduction. Your journey from Architecture to Civil Engineering is truly inspiring, and it's clear that you have a deep passion for the built environment.

    I have a suggestion that might help make your introduction even stronger. While your email is detailed and informative, you could consider making it a bit more concise by combining sentences or removing redundant phrases. This will help maintain the reader's attention.

    Overall, your email is already impressive, and the small adjustment can make it even better!

    Best regards,
    siqi

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    1. NURIN19 January 2025 at 20:27

      Hi Siqi,

      Thank you for your kind words!I will take note of the suggestions that you wrote and will make the changes.

      Best wishes,
      Nurin

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